Mar 28, 2006 05:28
18 yrs ago
English term

Jocelyn felt a tiny sting of conscience.

English to French Art/Literary Poetry & Literature
There was dust on the dashboard, and a large collection of cups and wrappers from various snacks and meals around her feet. Jocelyn hadn't offered to drive her own car, because it had been five whole days since she'd vacuumed it. The passenger-side window was streaked with dog spit and nose prints. She hadn't wanted to ask Grigg, all dressed up as he would be, to deal with dog hair and dirt. Evidently he'd had no similar compunction.
"Say1," Grigg said. They'd made it onto the freeway, and the tractor disappeared behind them in a stink of exhaust. Sacramento had some of the worst air quality in the country.
Grigg was driving exactly the legal limit; Jocelyn could see the speedometer. Daniel was the only other driver she knew who did that. In the whole world. "Say," Grigg repeated. "Did you ever read those books I bought for you? The Le Guins2?"
"Not yet." JOCELYN FELT A TINY STING OF CONSCIENCE. Feeling guilty did not improve her mood. Book-giving became a pushy, intrusive action when it was followed by "So how did you like those books?" Jocelyn gave many, many books away and never asked whether anyone had liked them.
Why should she apologize over not reading two books she'd never asked for? She didn't have to actually read science fiction to know what she thought of it. She'd seen Star Wars. When would Grigg get off her case about those damn books?
(Karen Joy Fowler, The Jane Austen Book Club.)

Discussion

pugnopugnat (asker) Mar 28, 2006:
Est-ce qu'il y aurait un second niveau de lecture pour cette expression? L'auteur cherche-t-il à créer un effet?

Proposed translations

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Jocelyne eut un léger accès de mauvaise conscience

Comme un accès de fièvre...
Peer comment(s):

agree Emérentienne
20 mins
Merci Cécile
agree GILLES MEUNIER
1 hr
Merci Gilles
agree Gat : Joli...
1 hr
Merci Gatraduction
agree MikeGarcia
3 hrs
agree NancyLynn
10 hrs
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9 mins

Jocelyn eut/fut effleurée par une pointe de conscience

... souvent anecdotique, sous la forme d'une sorte "d' étonnement en passant", l'émergence d'une pointe de conscience réflexive au coeur de l'état de rêve. ...
florence.ghibellini.free.fr/revelucidea/AQ84.html - 12k - En cache - Pages similaires


CYNE - Time Being... leurs productions étant éventées, ne démontrant aucune pointe de conscience qui est pourtant un des premier sens de cette musique. ...
www.hiphopdeal.com/article202.html - 76k - 26 mar 2006 - En cache - Pages similaires


Recensions Religiologiques 27... poussé par son désir vers une folie au cœur de laquelle affleure une pointe de conscience, renouvelle le concept périmé de folie complète qu’adopte le ...
www.religiologiques.uqam.ca/ 27/Recensions27/27recensions.htm - 201k

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43 mins

s'est sentie un peu coupable, cela n'améliora pas son humeur.

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1 hr

Jocelyn sentit un minuscule pincement de mauvaise conscience

avoir mauvaise conscience = feel guilty
Peer comment(s):

agree Conor McAuley
18 mins
agree NancyLynn : Lorsque ma fille est venue au monde j'ai dû corriger l'infirmière qui avait écrit "Jocelyn" comme prénom (hôpital anglo), pour lui expliquer que Jocelyne sans e donne un nom de garçon...pour la trad, j'ajouterais le E
11 hrs
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