Oct 20, 2011 06:35
12 yrs ago
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German term
Austria
Native in: German
Works in: English to German, German to English, French to German, and 3 more.
Strahlkraft entwickeln
German to English
Marketing
Marketing
Durch ein ideal auf die Branche abgestimmtes Werbe- und Marketingkonzept entwickelt die
AGRARIA eine besondere Strahlkraft – auch über die Grenzen Österreichs hinaus.
Due to an advertising and marketing concept which is ideally adjusted to the industry the AGRARIA develops a special attraction - reaching far beyond the borders of Austria??.
Vielen Dank!
AGRARIA eine besondere Strahlkraft – auch über die Grenzen Österreichs hinaus.
Due to an advertising and marketing concept which is ideally adjusted to the industry the AGRARIA develops a special attraction - reaching far beyond the borders of Austria??.
Vielen Dank!
Proposed translations
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Proposed translations
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Selected
radiates that 'special something'
Re. your translation:
I'd omit "developed", especially in the present tense! (the use of the present tense in such context is very German).
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Note added at 20 mins (2011-10-20 06:56:24 GMT)
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or, if you want to use 'develop', say sth like:
managed to develop the ability to radiate that special something
I'd omit "developed", especially in the present tense! (the use of the present tense in such context is very German).
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Note added at 20 mins (2011-10-20 06:56:24 GMT)
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or, if you want to use 'develop', say sth like:
managed to develop the ability to radiate that special something
4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
Comment: "vielen Dank!"
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Wendy Streitparth
Germany
Germany
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Germany
45 years experience
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Works in: German to English, French to English, Spanish to English, and 2 more.
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Agraria's impact
radiates far beyond.......
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5 hrs
Susan Welsh
United States
United States
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United States
Psychology, economics, politics
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4
has a (special) magnetism
I was thinking "a special sparkle," but the alliteration strikes me as too trite. Definitely get rid of "develop," as zirka says. And some other changes would be good, along the lines of:
Agraria's advertising and marketing concept, which is ideally suited to the industry, has a special magnetism that reaches far beyond the borders of Austria.
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I'm sorry, "lirka," not "zirka." Zirka is somebody else. :-)
Agraria's advertising and marketing concept, which is ideally suited to the industry, has a special magnetism that reaches far beyond the borders of Austria.
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Note added at 5 hrs (2011-10-20 12:09:06 GMT)
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I'm sorry, "lirka," not "zirka." Zirka is somebody else. :-)
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Ramey Rieger (X)
: Yes, magnetism - they're looking to attract visitors. Well done! What ever became of mittlerer?
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Thanks, Ramey. (No feedback from client yet on "mittlerer." I'll let you know!)
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oa_xxx (X)
: or appeal
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Thanks, orla
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Harald Moelzer (medical-translator)
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Thank you, Harald
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Emily Weidmann
Germany
Germany
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Germany
fast&reliable translations
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4
to develop radiant power
developing electric power
Example sentence:
To develop radiant power was the primary goal.
Reference:
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Raghunathan Rajagopalan
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Quality legal / financial translation
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Works in: German to English
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2
ability to captivate the atteiton of...
has developed the ability (technique) to capture the attention of...
sort of a magnetic appeal to capture the attention that reaches far beyond the borders....
sort of a magnetic appeal to capture the attention that reaches far beyond the borders....
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